Jeff Thelen |
Glorious Adjectives and Monstrous Adverbs
cleverly written upon the back of a ketchup stained napkinmelancholy imagery eerily shakes the rigid minds
of those fearless executives
as they loudly slurp their watered-down coffee
and the angst filled punks
sit silently staring
at the giant maple trees
as they tumble vigorously to the ground
and the slurping is unavoidably heard
above the boisterous crash of nature's old friend
and the innocent napkin is burned
4 comments
Friday, November 11, 2005
4 Comments:
I liked it
posted by 
on 11/16/2005 9:38 PM
a lot
posted by on 11/16/2005 9:39 PM
i like this one, the words seem to roll off the tongue quite nicely....however, i see that andi the coworker is nowhere to be found. good thing i didn't want to show it to my roommate or anything...cuz had i said hey there is a poem about me and then i went there and it wasn't posted i would be a liar.
posted by on 11/23/2005 12:16 AM
It's there Andi, just kinda far back in the archives. You can get right to it from this link:
http://www.peteyboy.com/2004/12/andi-co-worker.html
posted by 
Jeff on 11/23/2005 3:57 PM
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